Driving through the Fog

There’s a bit of the Romantic in me, so I’ve always loved fog. For me, it conjures a sense of mystery (bordering on the supernatural), solitude (my favorite!), and introspection.

Below is a poem from my first book, The Wind and the Shadows. On one level, it’s a poem about driving on a foggy day. On another level it’s…you tell me! What does the fog imagery evoke for readers?

Driving through the Fog

Driving through the fog
this morning.

Visibility 
is less than 100 feet
in any direction.
I can’t see where I’m going.
It’s all just white
like a blank canvas.

Shadows grow into dark shapes
that suggest
things ahead:
trees, houses, telephone poles.
But I can’t really see
anything
until I’m almost to it,
and I never know
which way
the road will take me.

In my rearview mirror
(which isn’t much bigger
than a photograph)
I see those things
that are behind me.
As I get further
past,
details become hazy
and colors fade.
Soon,
there are just phantoms
slipping into the fog.

Looking back
won’t get me anywhere 
but in the ditch.
Since I’m uncertain about
what’s ahead,
I slow up.

There’s still a ways to go
so I look around
and think about
my plans for the day.
As well as I am able,
I pass the time
that is left
and continue 

through the fog.

Published by mrteague

Teague McKamey lives in Washington state with his wife and two children. Teague’s poetry has appeared in several journals and in self-published books. He blogs at thevoiceofone.org and awanderingminstrel.com. In all areas of life, Teague desires that Christ may be magnified in his body (Php. 1:20).

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